Monday, January 28, 2008

The Hawk -Douglas Florian

I stare
I glare
I gaze
I gawk
With keen
Mean eyes
I am the hawk.
All day I pray
For prey to view.
Be thankful if
I don’t
see
YOU!
Analysis:
I enjoyed this poem because of the way the author ended it. The author begins be describing the hawk, grabbing your attention, then he ends it humorously. I like it :)

2 comments:

SNAM said...

i like it too! :D

Mrs. Emery said...

This is great - tee hee hee.